Prośba o sprawdzenie poprawności, angielski Opcje

[Balon]

Prosze drogich Moderatorow o nieusuwanie mojego topicu Potrzebuje szybko dowiedziec sie co i jak zle napisalem w moim miniwypracowaniu na angielski... (ucze sie anglika dopiero pol roku w szkole... ) jesli ktos bylby na tyle mily i sprawdzil mi to bylbym dozgonnie wdzieczny

My Father is civil engineer. He work in his office. He design a roads and bridges. His work isn’t humdrum. He co-operation with other company’s. He often uses mobile phone and works on the network, but not only. But he dont always work in the office, he work out too. He often use mobile phone and internet. He don’t design on paper, but on computer.
His day usually starts not early. He gets up about 9.00. After he eats a light breakfast: sandwiches and coffe or tea. At 10.00 he goes to work by car. In work he does a projects. But he dont always work in the office, he work out too. At 16.00 he come home. After he eats lunch with his family. Next he again goes to work. He come back at 16.00. He eats dinner. Next washes up and goes to bed. He sometimes watches TV. Occasionaly he to listen to his CD collection.
On weekends he usually goes to outing with his family or runs in a forest, but sometimes he has to goes to work.
He enjoy his work, because his work is his hobby.

Obiecuje ze wiecej nie bede Was meczyl takimi bzdurami

Pozdrawiam,
Krzysiek.

Ten post edytował Balon 23.03.2006, 19:06:47

[NuLL]

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